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Post by Carlisle on Mar 9, 2013 14:41:04 GMT -6
Name:Carlisle Aliases:Doctor Cullen Age:370 Gender:Male Species:Vampires Alignment:Good Canon or Original:Canon Date of Birth:1640s Place of Birth:London,England Physical Appearance: ts2.mm.bing.net/th?id=H.5060400036382841&pid=15.1Special Abilities:Speed,Hinghtend senses,strength Weapons:None History:He was born in London England in the time of religious concern. He was the son of a priest. His father hunted creatures such as Wearwolves,Witches, and Vampires. One night he was attacked by a vampire. Knowing he would be critisied,killed and not accepted back by his father he hid and handled the change. Because of this he tried to kill himself in a lot of ways. None of them working. His hunger got the best of him and he fed on a deer. Then in that moment he figured that he didnt need to fed on humans. He told himself he would resist his thirst and became a doctor. Soon after that he joined the Voultori. He then left and started bringing his new family together. It consisted of Edward,Esma,Rosealie,Emmet,Alice then Jasper. They were happy together until Alice had a vision of meeting a girl.
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Post by Ayen on Mar 9, 2013 14:58:47 GMT -6
I took the liberty of fixing your UBBC coding for you. Just for future reference if the image isn't uploaded by a free hosting service like Tinypic or Imageshack, direct link. Otherwise it's considered hotlinking. Can you expand on the vampire abilities please? Since vampires are pretty broad and have many different versions and not everyone would have read Twilight (as hard as that may be to believe with how popular it is). And can you expand more on his history? I'm fairly certain the good doctor has more background than that. I also suggest spell checking this application and proof reading. There are a couple of typos and you forgot to capitalize after a period. When these revisions are made I'll give it another look
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