Sayuri

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Name: Sayuri
Aliases: Yuri, Bianca
Age: forever 16
Gender: Female
Species: Human with Extreme Beyong Powers
Alignment: Good
Canon or Original: Original
Date of Birth: Unknown
Place of Birth: Lorien
Physical Appearance: i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn289/DarkHeart/anime%20girls/AnimeAngel31.jpg

Personality: Always lonely, sweet, shy, kind, protects her beloveds, strong in combat and loving
Special Abilities: manipulate dark souls to obey her and invinsibility plus the ability to heal.
Weapons: dark long swords filled with dark infectious poison
History: Sayuri only daughter of the Nanhanimagi family was always left alone being teased by other children who doesn’t posses special abilities like her’s. One day on Lorien, Sayuri stole a ship to runaway to Earth where she was on the journey to meet someone fulfilling to be her ‘MASTER’. She found her one and only MASTER who was lurking in the streets acting cool. They would always help each other when they soon fall in love. But, when her time came and her father found Sayuri, she was torn away from her MASTER and is now locked in the depths of HELL’s tower. She waits till one day her full potential power will soon arrive for her to break free and be with her Master hoping he would still be alive.

[DC Comics]

Hello and welcome to DOA.

There are a couple of things I'd like to go over with you concerning your character sheet. The first thing being, personality needs to be at least one good well written paragraph.

I would also like a bit more details given to her special abilities. To what extent can she manipulate dark souls and also don't forget to define "dark souls" for us. Also, how much damage can she heal exactly? Is it just mild wounds?

History needs to be at least two well written paragraphs so some more details there would be appreciated. You could always explain a little more about her parents and Master if you can't think of anything else to add.

Once these revisions have been made I'll take another look at the character sheet. If you have any questions feel free to ask me via PM (Just click on the icon below my avatar image on the left-hand side of the screen).

[DC Comics]

Due to failure to comply to the revisions listed above and not logging in for 30 days this application will be moved to archives. If you return and wish to continue this character application please let me know via PM.