Maelys Knight
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Challenge me, and the only destiny for you is a painful death.
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Post by Maelys Knight on Sept 12, 2012 1:50:08 GMT -6
These plot screwovers are what we designers live to create.
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Tajna Rasha
Wraith
Founder of the DOA Wiki
The Ghost of Legion
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Post by Tajna Rasha on Sept 12, 2012 9:57:38 GMT -6
Plot twist within a plot twist!
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Post by Sparda on Sept 12, 2012 11:25:25 GMT -6
Wait, I'm confused. Is that Tajna hiding beneath the removed mask? I doubt Veran could've disposed of him that easily...
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Post by Silver Eyes on Sept 12, 2012 11:51:34 GMT -6
Wait, I'm confused. Is that Tajna hiding beneath the removed mask? I doubt Veran could've disposed of him that easily... Nope. More like...Let's do the time warp agaaaaaaaaaain. |
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Post by Ayen on Sept 12, 2012 12:02:29 GMT -6
Amoura QQ about her character dying so much Gui had to turn around and bring her back to life  |
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Post by Silver Eyes on Sept 12, 2012 12:38:43 GMT -6
Amoura QQ about her character dying so much Gui had to turn around and bring her back to life I knew that was going to happen. I just had fun acting like I lost her |
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Alex
Time Lord
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Post by Alex on Sept 12, 2012 12:47:02 GMT -6
Miracle and I did it better.
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Post by Silver Eyes on Sept 12, 2012 12:58:35 GMT -6
Miracle and I did it better. There's so much I can say about this... |
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Tajna Rasha
Wraith
Founder of the DOA Wiki
The Ghost of Legion
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Post by Tajna Rasha on Sept 12, 2012 23:28:54 GMT -6
Miracle and I did it better. Please, save criticism for when the plot has finished twisting ;D |
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Post by Aminee Starlight on Sept 13, 2012 0:48:12 GMT -6
Dem bones, dem bones. Dem bones, dem bones. Mmmmm. Dem bones, dem bones. Where's Booth? |
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Post by dmc89 on Sept 13, 2012 0:50:36 GMT -6
Dem bones, dem bones. Dem bones, dem bones. Mmmmm. Dem bones, dem bones. To quote Ranka; "Get off the fucking stage." |
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Post by Silver Eyes on Sept 13, 2012 10:12:23 GMT -6
Dem bones, dem bones. Dem bones, dem bones. Mmmmm. Dem bones, dem bones. Where's Booth? That reminds me. I need to finish making Dr. Brennan... Tch. Don't appreciate my musical talent? ;P |
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Post by Legion on Sept 13, 2012 14:30:07 GMT -6
Told you guys I sensed a disturbance in the plot.
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Post by Kragen on Sept 14, 2012 15:37:12 GMT -6
So glad to see this thread continue. I'll post my thoughts on the posts so far.
1.) Bones add a nice touch. Where you get the pictures from?
2.) I expected some time during the task Tajna was gonna have to time warp Amoura. Actually I expected this to take place more than once but I can understand why not due to time consumption. (lol puns)
3.) Okay, that mask was fantastic. Easily the best of the three and every bit as terrifying as I imagined The End to be.
4.) Huh, not sure where they're going with this. If Amoura knows it's a trap and has to be willing to put it on I can't see why she would if it will do the exact opposite of what she came there for.
5.) Minor nitpick. I enjoy the majority of the posts you make on here but a reoccurring problem I always see is dialog, or at least, the timing of certain dialog. If you're going to end a sentence with "You know of everything else I'm going to ask so I fail to see a point in asking anything else." then it's probably not a good idea to follow it up with, well, asking something else.
I look forward to seeing the rest of the thread play out.
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Post by Tenjou, Utena on Sept 14, 2012 15:49:06 GMT -6
Then her mind raced at what she saw. That unmistakable feeling of dread that had taken everything from her felt like nothing now at the revelation that was bestowed upon her. That in this moment, she realized what the face of god represented. She finally remembered what she had seen so long ago in that cave where Lucifer had been set free – when she had seen the End in one nearly fatal moment. She was now looking at that same visage in the object of her salvation.
The Shroud was the face of an Arashi. Edited by ToriJ Reply by Utena ToriJ  Utena 
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